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:iconblackfirm:
At last I came around coloring something again.
:iconrijio: posted some new linearts and so I'm a little behind coloring those ;P
His colored version of the lineart looks better though xD

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Lineart: :iconrijio: - [link]
Background texture: :iconaleeka-stock: - [link]
Lingerie texture: :iconlunartex: - [link]
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I uaually don't go for anime pictures, but this one is growing on me!
The composition itself is great. Strong silhouette, good contrast with the background... All good, the thumb really stands out.
I like the simple subject matter too, it works.
The fact that you can't see her face makes it all the better, as we can imagine what she looks like from the front.
As for the line art and colouring job itself, it looks sound. The proportions seem all there. A bit more depth might have helped the figure look more three dimensional, but that's a minor issue.
Nice work!
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Nun ja, da dies ein coloriertes Bild ist, fällt eine Kritik an den Outlines schon einmal weg, obwohl mir dort ein paar kleine Fehler auffallen.
Das Colorierte ist jedoch gut geraten, alles schön weich, keine harten Schatten (wobei ich harte Schatten nicht verteufeln will, sie haben auch ihren Reiz und Daseinsberechtigung). Ich wioll mehr damit ausdrücken, dass es kein komische Mischding aus beiden ist.
Die Hautfarbe hast dui in meinen Augen wirklich gut getroffen, sie gefällt mir sehr gut.
Ledioglich der dunkle Rotton der Kleidung gefällt mir nicht so ganz, er wirkt mir zu dunkel für das Bild.
Licht und Schatten hast du gut gesetzt, lediglich am linken Arm gefällt mir das Licht an den Aussenseiten nicht ganz. Es wirkt auf mich zu stark aus dieser Sicht, wenn man sich die beiden interessant gesetzten Lichtpunkte anschaut.
Der Hintergrund passt von Musterung und Farbe wirklich klasse zu dem Körper, er ist dezent im Hintergrund und lässt den Blicj des Betrachters auf den Körper konzentrieren ohne dass der Blick zu sehr abgelenkt wird.
alles in allem ist es eine schöne Coloration :)
Ignoriere die Sternchen, die kann man bei solch einem Bild nicht wirklich anwenden.
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~Blackfirm Aug 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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:iconmomewraths-outgrabe:
i lik the use of lighting as well as the shading. Where i believe this work could use improvement is on making the curves a bit softer and curvier.
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~Blackfirm Mar 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch ^^''
You know I just colored it though, right?
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~Xiaomei23 Mar 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice! I like how you emphasize that sexy does not necessarily mean impossibly, unnaturally curvy :)

For critique, I think her anatomy is a little bit off, especially her upper body. Her shoulder blades (that's what they're called, right?) are too close together, I think. Also on her right hand, the pinky finger looks awkward.

Overall, nice job :)
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~Blackfirm Mar 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch ^^'
I only colored it though ~_~
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~Xiaomei23 Mar 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure!
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`BenHeine Mar 6, 2010  Professional General Artist
awesome!
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~Blackfirm Mar 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch ^^
Also, for the fav :D
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